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For @Muna
This are my critiques, you can critique them, the first one is finished and the second one is/isnt
Bluecatanimation
Hello I am Bluecatanimtions I make art and sometimes animations I am a minor I am a august Leo
Rules
1. No tracing as you see I put my water Mark everywhere
2. No Nsfw maybe a little gore
3. Don’t be rude
And that’s all I can think of have a good day/night
Rules
1. No tracing as you see I put my water Mark everywhere
2. No Nsfw maybe a little gore
3. Don’t be rude
And that’s all I can think of have a good day/night
Genre
- Oc
Profile
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- Gender：Female
Thank you for the tips!
No worries! To get out of that dead eye look, just try and make more expression in the eyes, have her look somwhere maybe, Unless its for a very specific reason that she doesnt have any expression (like a character sheet), its always good to have more expression for a nice drawing.
This may need you to look at your fav artists (more than one), and see how they draw the eyes. Eyes can have a million different shapes even in anime and such, so utilise that.
Omg I’m now just realizing that the thumb is indeed on the wrong side you are right
Thank you I will definitely be taking hands into consideration, when I draw them it’s so hard so I resort to block type that’s supposed to be on low poly 3d models, with the eyes I will fix the first one and the second one, in her lore she lost her husband so she lost everything, and with the mouths I do need to work on that too sometimes I just don’t put any since I don’t know what to but in the moment, thank you tho. also how do I get out of the dead eye look?
https://au.pinterest.com/munasketches/tutorials-and-studies/hands/
Do a bunch of sketches using these as references. If thats too difficult, trace over them, but actually break them down into simple shapes.
On the first one, her left hand on her hip has the thumb on the wrong side also.
You could probably work on your mouths aswell? I think its a comfort thing for you not to draw them or just draw them simply. Its a style preference not to draw the mouth, but when you do, I think you could play more with expressions and detail.
I think the last thing are the eyes. I love the second one! But the first one looks a tad "dead" or neutral. Try adding a sparkle to them, or have more expression. But otherwise, I really love your art here! Keep going =D