Magical Girl Death Wish
> Matsuyama Aratani Thank you :)
I liked your work, I would have liked it to be a little more extensive, but in general, it's very good. Good luck, buddy
> Qiklope Thank you for the thoughtful comment ! You have given great advice. I will consider this going forward
The protagonist attempts to murder someone in cold blood, but we're supposed to think the coworker is the evil one? If so, your characterization needs a lot of work.