Raykosen

Wow, the story and art was amazing!!! I'm very glad that the text was big enough to read lol

This manga is lovely. I hope this one becomes a series in Jump!

The art is lovely. I like the minimal detail. There's a lot of empty space sometimes though which can make me feel a little lost. The story is very cute but not a lot is happening besides them talking about their lives. You probably should have them do something it didn't really feel like the story was going anywhere. Don't get me wrong I did like it but I just feel like nothing really happened until they jumped off the balcony. (At least I think that's what happened) Also try to keep in mind with comics it's better to show and not tell you shouldn't tell us that, that lady is their mother. You have to trust the viewer a little and only say who she is if there would be confusion with who she might be. Sorry I hope this doesn't come off as mean I really like it and it would be cool to see you guys improve!

Beautiful! I love it ♡

Like!!