What I liked the most with your manga was the paneling/layouts of the pages, and the amount of black you use, very manga-esque! The story was a little dense, like you tried to put a little too much in it and not enough time was put on each scene. But I understand that you wanted to tell the story in its full version.
Quality art and story is always a guarantee from you guys! Please keep making more!
This comic is really good