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I will start with some criticism. First of all, I would encourage you to make your manga reading from Right to Left. It will help with reading it on this page. Making the whole experience much more fluid. Second thing is paneling, overall I can read all of them, but lack of spacing between panels makes whole manga unreasonably clattered. You should use thin spaces for vertical purposes and wider ones for horizontal. I would recommand closely analysing manga you admire made by pros. It helped me a lot in my process!
Another thing, yout speach bubbles have unecesserely thick out line, you could easily shrink them and leave this thickness for IMAPACTFULL moments.
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And also thank you so much max_a_million this feedback is extremely helpful to me, I really appreciate it. I'll definitely keep in mind to take pictures of pages in better light.
I don't have a computer so it's a little difficult for me to do a lot of the fancy techniques most manga have. But I remind myself some of the absolute greatest manga were made traditionally, so I'll continue doing my best with what I have. Again thank you so much for these comments.
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I will start with some criticism. First of all, I would encourage you to make your manga reading from Right to Left. It will help with reading it on this page. Making the whole experience much more fluid. Second thing is paneling, overall I can read all of them, but lack of spacing between panels makes whole manga unreasonably clattered. You should use thin spaces for vertical purposes and wider ones for horizontal. I would recommand closely analysing manga you admire made by pros. It helped me a lot in my process!
Another thing, yout speach bubbles have unecesserely thick out line, you could easily shrink them and leave this thickness for IMAPACTFULL moments.
And also thank you so much max_a_million this feedback is extremely helpful to me, I really appreciate it. I'll definitely keep in mind to take pictures of pages in better light.
I don't have a computer so it's a little difficult for me to do a lot of the fancy techniques most manga have. But I remind myself some of the absolute greatest manga were made traditionally, so I'll continue doing my best with what I have. Again thank you so much for these comments.