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Se nota que estas experimentando e intentando salir de tu zona de confort haciendo algo mas shonen que lo que sueles hacer.
Siento que este esta mucho mas acorde a la pagina, no creo que te vayan a dar problema.
Pero mas allá de ello no hay mas que sea destacablemente positivo que pueda decir.
Ahora yendo a lo regular y negativo y que probablemente nadie te lo mencione:
me da la sensación que te forzarte a hacer algo mas shonen.
mejoraría un poco la narrativa visual y el recorrido de la misma ya que siguen habiendo fallas en ese aspecto.
Tambien esto no es un One-shot.
Recuerda que un oneshot empieza y termina en 1 solo episodio,
La primera mitad es algo innecesario, yo habría intentado reducir la trama a 50 paginas y creo que habría quedado mejor y a pesar de todo eso no sentí nada por los personajes al final.
espero no te tomes a mal mi opinión compa.
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Se nota que estas experimentando e intentando salir de tu zona de confort haciendo algo mas shonen que lo que sueles hacer.
Siento que este esta mucho mas acorde a la pagina, no creo que te vayan a dar problema.
Pero mas allá de ello no hay mas que sea destacablemente positivo que pueda decir.
Ahora yendo a lo regular y negativo y que probablemente nadie te lo mencione:
me da la sensación que te forzarte a hacer algo mas shonen.
mejoraría un poco la narrativa visual y el recorrido de la misma ya que siguen habiendo fallas en ese aspecto.
Tambien esto no es un One-shot.
Recuerda que un oneshot empieza y termina en 1 solo episodio,
La primera mitad es algo innecesario, yo habría intentado reducir la trama a 50 paginas y creo que habría quedado mejor y a pesar de todo eso no sentí nada por los personajes al final.
espero no te tomes a mal mi opinión compa.