¿Qué te pareció el episodio?

I'm just uploading this because i need criticism for it, these are the second manga project i ever try wroking on.
I welcome any criticism as long as it's constructive.
I already dislike the pages 4 and 5 and will probably redraw them again because the buubles seem too forced and too crowded.
As I said, I need criticism for my art, my text, what things do you think don't need to be here and is the progression overall understandable.


These 14 pages are part of a much bigger projects some some aspects are meant to be a little mysterious (for example backstory references)

Please feel free to give me your opinion and your advice.

Thanks for reading <333