Damn, I was about to say that I didn't like the fact that she survived cancer because it seemed to cliche, but Why would you hit me with an ending like that?
Despite good art, your story and panel are really great. It reminds me of "lookback" and "goodbye eri" by tatsuki fujimoto sensei (chainsaw man mangaka) but you includes your own style, that's good. In fact, you have a lotx2 of potential to become much better compared to this one (FIRE RING is also great tho). I'm sure that you'll become really famous one day. And if it's ok, can you please check out my work? (although my art is bad and it's still my first manga) and let me know your thoughts on it. https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/1k2405172158171600026061703/
this was such a AMAZING READ! it gives me goodbye eri vibes, also love the artstyle it seems like u rlly love tatsuki fujimoto huh well same here! Im a newbie in making manga currently but i will definately give you tough competition in future U BET!
I LOVE THIS! love the art, characters and made me sad Also some of the wording in the dialogue was a bit weird but I'll let It slide and i really want to see more of your work in the future!
Damn dude Hisdeath hit me like a TRAIN, i was honestly expecting herto die, the writing is awesome for a oneshot and i can see that getting serialized!🔥🔥
Damn, I was about to say that I didn't like the fact that she survived cancer because it seemed to cliche, but Why would you hit me with an ending like that?
Despite good art, your story and panel are really great. It reminds me of "lookback" and "goodbye eri" by tatsuki fujimoto sensei (chainsaw man mangaka) but you includes your own style, that's good. In fact, you have a lotx2 of potential to become much better compared to this one (FIRE RING is also great tho). I'm sure that you'll become really famous one day. And if it's ok, can you please check out my work? (although my art is bad and it's still my first manga) and let me know your thoughts on it. https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/1k2405172158171600026061703/
this was such a AMAZING READ! it gives me goodbye eri vibes, also love the artstyle it seems like u rlly love tatsuki fujimoto huh well same here! Im a newbie in making manga currently but i will definately give you tough competition in future U BET!
I LOVE THIS! love the art, characters and made me sad Also some of the wording in the dialogue was a bit weird but I'll let It slide and i really want to see more of your work in the future!
Damn dude Hisdeath hit me like a TRAIN, i was honestly expecting herto die, the writing is awesome for a oneshot and i can see that getting serialized!🔥🔥
FIRE RING
FIRE RING
Thanks for reading my comment 😭
This was my favorite manga i have read on MPC
Please make more comics i really want to read them
Im a newbie in making manga currently but i will definately give you tough competition in future U BET!
Also some of the wording in the dialogue was a bit weird but I'll let It slide and i really want to see more of your work in the future!
this one must win!
Meat ringu es mejor