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Thank you for reading my manga! If you enjoyed it or have anything to say, let me know in the comments!

Mangaka.tobi4 months ago

Woah 😯 didn't expect me to like this so much 🙂

-cvensart4 months ago

The art is good as well as story. It actually felt emotional to me. Keep it up.
Please do check out mine and let me know your thoughts on it.
https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/7s2407131246486670015833904/

Rase Entel4 months ago

Amazing art. I love the emotion each character expresses.

benjamin4 months ago

Amazing page, I love this creator

Priyanshi4 months ago

Love it bro
Just perfect

LeafBound Inc.4 months ago

The way you blend humor with heartfelt moments is just perfect! Your manga always puts a smile on my face!
If it’s not a lot of trouble, can you please look at this manga and tell me what you think? Subscribe if you want to read more! Thanks!⚔️

https://medibang.com/mpc/titles/xb2409030951201100026464972/

AnoobishManga3 months ago

I read the whole chapter! It's a great start to your series. I enjoyed the world building 🌎 and the introduction of the main character. I think you did great at building suspense 😀

Also, loved the message at the end. I can definitely relate and you certainly help motivate me to publish my own in the near future. I love following your work 😁

ItsPickleTheRick4 months ago

I love the artstyle, the story seem interesting so far and you make the setting really clear and i am excited to see whats next.

Yes374 months ago

It has good art and paneling. Has some issues story, but I recommend you reading it, since you can also learn from the way the mangaka wrote and drew

fellow4 months ago

woooooahhhhh congratulations 🎉🎉🎉🎉.... I READ IT!! CONTINUE IT!!! DONT STOP!!! GIVE AN END TO THE STORY and dont make the ending sad, im gonna curse u or else 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 even tho that black haired sentinel looked hawt, I'M WITH CIPHER!!! and (also make sure to disclose how did he came to meet jena without getting found, wait he must have some powers, hmm it seems exciting) im looking forward to a good story line, good luck, and ur art is great as always (u can do improvements with anatomy) ...line artstyle made me remember BSD manga... I want to write more but I wonder I'll be too honest and end up write everything honestly.. so GOOD LUCK!!! and CONGRATULATIONS 🥳🥳🥳 your hardwork wasn't wasted and I as a reader and as a fellow artist 🫶, enjoyed both the story and the artwork. Keep a kind heart and give some good moments to Jena 🥹

slim3y4 months ago

This is good. This is well written, the characters are well written. And the art is great. Will you continue on with this? Because that will really test your limits. The only criticism i have (not really a problem but saying it because it sometimes helps.) the parents were not introduced clearly, there was not enough connection and familiarity between the characters and the reader. I understand you must have not had enough space and that it's only the first chapter. But you should be proud of what you've done. I can tell you now, your manga has a lot of potential. You should count me as one of the people who want you to continue.

Draggerd4 months ago

Sup?...I READ YOUR MANGA! I think you have a great piece of work because it's so relevant and relatable to the present day. I was engaged by seeing what the characters in your setting valued. It was like i was watching a stage performance alongside your main protagonist. The sentinel entrance was so epic because of where you placed him on the page and the feeling of depth from the other officers and background buildings. His design is so cruel yet cool.
And not for nothing but Shadow of Lumina contains a moral lesson I had forgotten; division is being encouraged between us so we can't unite and over throw our oppressors. I will say got confused as to where to read the dialogue at some points but who cares! the double page on 42 smacked the shit out me and it made me excited to go create. World needs this right here. GREAT WORK!

Pickle4 months ago

I quite enjoy the interesting art style and way of writing especially with the hook you had for the beginning.

NEKOOO4 months ago

Bro this having only 33 likes is mad crazy

Epic Box4 months ago

This is one of the most emotionally drive stories I red on here! Spectacular work! The pacing felt very natural and the weight of everything felt very real!

Naqiubex4 months ago

Great, nice work

Underdragon2 months ago

Great manga you've got here! Maybe and it's not a big deal, you should improve a little with the backgrounds, but overall it's very cool! Fair warning: Your webpage hiperlinks to twittter and youtube don't work, i'd try to reparate them if it were you. It makes you look unprofessional. I hope you are faring better now! Continue with the great job!

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