Halfpiece88
The lack of background is a bit jarring to me. Judging from the artwork, i assume you are a beginner artist. Try to find the time to do anatomical studies or study from your favourite artist. Well, i said my piece, good luck out there
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-cvensart
Nice one. The episode 1 is quite good although the artwork could use more background. Keep it up.
Please check out mine if it's ok with you and let me know your thoughts on it.
https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/dn2404131417305390015833904/
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