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Your story is well written. But it's still pretty bland if you are just going to make the mc fight again and win all the time so to spice it up when he is about to lose I want you to introduce a side character who also has the same kind of power like the mc. You know the lighting power . You sould also flesh out the story more with where the powers come from I'm not telling you to do it in the first chapters but I just want you to use one of the villains to tell the lore about it. The girl that the mc likes is pretty is pretty bland too so try to flesh out her backstory and make it show why the mc likes the girl in the first place or why the girl can't like the mc back. That's about all thanks for talking to me🙏
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And check my manga plz https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/m52408071601142110026573553/
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https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/122407280601534920024615169/
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if you want to read my manga, the link is here https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/zj2408062244096660024909092/
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Your story is well written. But it's still pretty bland if you are just going to make the mc fight again and win all the time so to spice it up when he is about to lose I want you to introduce a side character who also has the same kind of power like the mc. You know the lighting power . You sould also flesh out the story more with where the powers come from I'm not telling you to do it in the first chapters but I just want you to use one of the villains to tell the lore about it. The girl that the mc likes is pretty is pretty bland too so try to flesh out her backstory and make it show why the mc likes the girl in the first place or why the girl can't like the mc back. That's about all thanks for talking to me🙏
And check my manga plz https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/m52408071601142110026573553/
https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/122407280601534920024615169/
if you want to read my manga, the link is here https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/zj2408062244096660024909092/