I sometimes notice highs and lows in my works. Like one chapter being really well paced and interesting, maybe even fun, that’s the “highs” and then there’s a chapter that is for one or few reasons ofd — the “lows”. Unfortunately I think this episode/chapter is one of the “lows”… I attempted to do too much. As you can see, by page number, it is currently the longest chapter and there is so many stuff that was supposed to happed in it. I believe that this chapter suffers the most from pacing, although there is still some good and interesting stuff here. So, I liked the idea, but executed it not well…
