Back in 2018, I decided to revisit and revise this chapter, both from a storytelling and art perspective. When I originally designed Chapter 4, I wasn't satisfied with it because I felt that my ideas had evolved since then. Initially, I wrote the chapter based on concepts I had as a teenager in the mid to late 2000s, which made the story feel disconnected to me.
One of the challenges was not altering the original art too much but enhancing it with quality changes. I want to showcase my growth from chapter to chapter, and while the changes are noticeable, they have definitely improved the chapter.
One day, I hope to share the original version to highlight the differences, but that will likely be on my website. For now, I can tell you that many pages were revised—quite a lot, actually! I'm much happier with the result.
