Good luck

The extreme cold in the story really is the condition here while reading this. Keep it up.

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The story is really a good start. I like it though. Keep it up.
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The story is good and like how it's simply laid. Keep it up.
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The art sort of similar skills as jjk artistic style. Keep it up. I like it.
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The major issue is the word bubble, it's so tiny. It makes it hard to read. Keep it up though.

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I think I sense some humor in the story, not bad at all. Keep it up, I like it.

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The story is a fun read, not gonna lie. But maybe you can consider improving on the anatomy. Keep it up.
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The fighting scene are good. But reminds me alot like Hero Acedemia. Keep it up.

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Thank you so much, I really appreciate alot. You can check out it's other chapters and leave your thoughts on it. I will be glad to go through them all.