I still think your manga is good regardless the artstyle. So keep it up.

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Some tactics on how to improve oneself? I'm thinking? Anyway keep it up.
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The lady Arizel is kind of weird but maybe she's got her reason. Maybe. Anyway, keep it up.
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Your paneling reminds me alot of one piece and I think the story is good.
Keep it up.
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The story is interesting I must say and art is Abit above Amateur level. Keep it up.
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I think there's a mystery behind the story and that's what I find interestingly good.

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The story is interestingly good but for the art it's not too bad. Keep it up.
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I think the manga part if the page start getting interesting so keep it up.
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I do say, just keep it up.
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The story is good and I kinda like it. Keep it up.

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