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Art is great almost top tier in fact and the story and presentation meets to its genre which is fantasybut i would say the narrations and screen writing need more work i already read 3 chapters by the time this comment i would say it needs more action or a tension building for the script. Don't take me wrong i am only saying this because this is what i observed but it the script needs more watching and i think it would have been great if the mc is introduced in the first chapter itself. To be more precise i can say all these 3 chapters can be made into 1 chapter i am looking forward to chapter 4
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Art is great almost top tier in fact and the story and presentation meets to its genre which is fantasybut i would say the narrations and screen writing need more work i already read 3 chapters by the time this comment i would say it needs more action or a tension building for the script. Don't take me wrong i am only saying this because this is what i observed but it the script needs more watching and i think it would have been great if the mc is introduced in the first chapter itself. To be more precise i can say all these 3 chapters can be made into 1 chapter i am looking forward to chapter 4
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