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The story has a nice flow, especially the dialogues. The direction of the eye goes well while reading, but some scenes should have a more interesting perspective to grasp the reader's attention. Also, try making the introduction around 4 pages and focus on relevant scenes to describe the setting and making the overall have the composition of either a flashback (the background behind the panels should be a dark color and that would be colored digitally in that case or as the story is western and religious, I suggest that the intro would be in an art style different from the story and more like what we see in churches). You got this!
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The story has a nice flow, especially the dialogues. The direction of the eye goes well while reading, but some scenes should have a more interesting perspective to grasp the reader's attention. Also, try making the introduction around 4 pages and focus on relevant scenes to describe the setting and making the overall have the composition of either a flashback (the background behind the panels should be a dark color and that would be colored digitally in that case or as the story is western and religious, I suggest that the intro would be in an art style different from the story and more like what we see in churches). You got this!
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