I liked the atmosphere
and the proportion of the characters!
just 2 pieces of advice
I noticed that you used some references!
Here's the thing: when using references, try to make significant changes
to avoid comparisons with the works in reference
!and study the fundamentals of drawing
I hope I didn't offend you unintentionally!

I liked the atmosphere between the first two characters! I'm sure you'll improve a lot! I advise you to study the fundaments of drawing!

I liked! The design is very detailed, it just needs better organization of these elements I advise you to study the basics of drawing!

I will see the works as soon as possible!

Arigato! I'll take a look!...

Thank you very much... I hope I can always count on you! I'll take a look at your work!

I am very grateful! I intend to continue! with the works! I'll take a look!