thank you for your feedback and for taking the time to keave a comment<3

Thanks for your kind words!
And i checked your manga and left a comment, the story and your main characters are really interesting.

The story is easy to follow, the dialogues are good, I like the way the characters stay consistent (their designs, as in you clealry know who is who).
I'd like to see what happens next, it got me invested, and the uncle seems to be a piece of shit.
Can't wait to see more <3

Thank you so much.
I'll fix the cameraman's dialogue with Djimon and hopefully it'll look more natural.


I actually didn't think of making the top left panel dialogue as a call for help but now that you point it out it does sound better and more natural for the situation.


You're right about the doctor's dialogue it's him speaking so thanks for pointing this too out.

Honestly thank you again, your feedback is really helpful, and thanks for taking the time to write this comment, it means a lot to me.

I hope you have a great day/night <3

Thank you so much 🩷🩷🩷

Your art is great, and the story is interesting

Omg, thank you so much for your comment😭, I really appreciate the feedback and it's actually good to get someone’s opinion on my first work 💖
I'll do my best to progress and take account of your remarks.
Besides I agree with you for the black background, it was a pain in the ass to try and make them look ok but scan fucked up the shadows so i had to take pictures with my phone 🥲
Anyways, thank you so much for being the first person to comment and for being so nice 😊