Very nice, are you planning to eventually print it?

The story is fantastic. And A very big improvement in art from 'its upto you'. But I believe that the background depth and dimensions could have been better, also there is a large lack of environmental sound effects, like when she arrives to kazuya and she's late, her breathing could have been scattered to add emphasis, and lastly the manga could have used all sorts of background screentones to add emphasis on certain scenes, but this is just my opinion, overall a solid 9/10 🔥

apni bangali?

It's good but the page flow needs work

Hey i watch you on YouTube, guess we are going to be fellow authors now