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My background as a Manga Creator
I have been writing and creating manga since 2015. My first project is my story "Providence" and my current work is Hunters of Illumis!
This chapter looks really great! The choreography of the fight scene is amazing and your art has really gotten better in so many ways! I think that this fight could've been way better and more impactful if you really showed their relationship prior instead of just telling us how close they were. Cause now I feel the audience has to take the emotional side of it just at face value instead of experiencing the emotions at play. Either way, GREAT CHAPTER!
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This chapter looks really great! The choreography of the fight scene is amazing and your art has really gotten better in so many ways! I think that this fight could've been way better and more impactful if you really showed their relationship prior instead of just telling us how close they were. Cause now I feel the audience has to take the emotional side of it just at face value instead of experiencing the emotions at play. Either way, GREAT CHAPTER!
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