I’m sorry I had forgotten it for a while, but I’ll try to restart it and give you my thoughts.

If you really want to get my thoughts, it’ll take me some time to read it(your project) and write them(my thoughts on it), but I’m gonna warn you that I have a weird, unpolished way of analysing other people’s work, so before doing so, I’ll have to ask if you really want to. I also feel like I often sound rude and want to be as honest as possible. If after hearing all of my warnings you still want to hear my opinion, let me know.

So far it seems really good… like REALLY good, especially if I compare it to one of my own projects.
Just out of curiosity – do you use “G pen” brush for your inking,(I noticed how textured the line work was and thought it must’ve been the case)

I’m really glad you hear that you enjoyed it. Honestly I wasn’t expecting to get a comment here… like ever. But I’m very happy that I received(is that the right word?) one from you.

I would like to work on this series more, but I just have too many projects and I haven’t yet learned how to work on them consistently and effectively.

I won’t lie, it was really confusing…
Probably instead of asking I should read the next chapter, but does it somehow tie in with the first chapter?

Firstly — 20 minutes!!??(well I know you said “about”…)It’s not CRAZY crazy, but despite being very simple(the art and everything overall) it is definitely not bad, so 20 minutes is a pretty good time; second — if you didn’t work that hard on this and still made something like that, it would be really interesting to see what you could do if you tried harder… Just now read that you also drew with “your fingers”, guessing smartphone, right? That’s even more of an achievement, but if possible I would really advise to at least get a cheap drawing tablet(if you have some kind of pc or laptop), I remember buying one for 30 or 35(that would be euros…), but I used it for a few years probably… and technically I still can, but somehow I managed to scratch the surface so much that it looks almost like another planet(that has craters…) The experience is way more fun then, but also it unintentionally makes it more serious…

overall — pretty good.

This is the first comic I ever uploaded and it’s not only unfinished(barely started), but also pretty bad… As for why some pages resolution is different from other pages resolution… I have no idea, but sorry anyways.

I managed to add a JoJo reference. I’m proud of myself… In that aspect… at least.

I’m so stressed out and confused. First the resolution… When I began working on this comic 1 year and some months ago, I didn’t know anything, counting where should I upload it to and the previous site I uploaded it to had a 940X2000 page size/resolution limit. I actually wanted to work on bigger page and now that I decided to try and upload my works here, I’ll try that. There is currently 9 chapters of this comic, but then I started another one(that had 3), finally there’s the one I’m currently working on and trying to finish. I want to apologise beforehand for all of those and hopefully from chapter 6 of my currently newest “series” I’ll draw on bigger canvas(but also I will be trying to switch to Medibang or JumpPaint from that chapter so… It’ll be difficult. ) The last also — what is the best canvas size for uploading here?

I sound rude, don’t I?