In terms of art this one is pretty similar to the previous but keep it up, they're both a step up from first ones, Never stop drawing 👍

This is more like a prologue than a first chapter, nice art tho but so far so nothing about the plot has been revealed yet

Cool work bro, very fun ride
The premise is simple and is nothing too unique but the energy you bring to it is amazing, we'll see how it goes from here I'm looking forward to what you're gonna do different keep it up 🔥

Seems like you're getting a bit better with every new one...is this still the old one?

It's for the nerds who love details,most if the things talked about I've already talked on just using this chapter to summerize it cuz I ain't explaining the system again so best take notes of what you can if you're into details

Why stop here before going on hiatus at least finish the fight dawg😭

Wait is this a remake? It's very similar to the first version so I'm not sure

Eyy,this is not going to end well what's going to happen now😅

I take it back, you might have to redraw this bro it's not presentable enough 😆
Phenomena is a remake as well I was drawing it for 3 years and reached like 7 volumes of content them I restarted once I felt It was good enough to be presented ,first and foremost in all you have to make sure your audience has no issue understanding what's going on
This is not a matter of just art btw, pacing, paneling, etc don't do this story justice so even tho the next few might be miles better it'll still be hard to get into from a chapter like this so I'd advice you redo the old ones with your current skill

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