Beautiful art, super good paneling, and really creative story

*Dies from peak fiction*

Peak Cinema fr

Leo is broken and too OP, Slash needs to go handle him

Also good cliffhanger, i'm waiting to see that fraud with the gun get packed up next chapter (i hope my GOAT leo is not dead!!)

...is already set up in chapter 1. So we already knew it was coming. Potentially a "end of the world" ending in the final arc?

5. The art is awesome and has very clear expressions. The action is top notch. Despite it being simplistic, it works really well.

The only thing i would add is that in this specific chapter the fight scenes were a bit unclear.

Tho despite that, the first chapter sets up alot of plot threads and plot lines that can be explored later on (and will probably be explored), and they would have had the necessary setup.

Good job and keep going! Waiting to see more!

Peak cinema fr
(1/2)
The things i like about this manga are that:

1. Good power system that has room for alot of creativity and expansion. And worldbuilding leading to the mystery of the Everlast humans. Where they came from and how many of them are there? (leading perfectly to whatever character you want to introduce next)

2. The main character is interesting and has personality. And she seems naive and optimistic right now, which again is probably set up for later down the line when one of her dreams doesn't get realized (also the cliffhanger on which dream it is leads to the mystery that makes me wanna continue reading)

3. The other characters are well done where they all have their unique personalities and quirks. Yet still have a common goal. And work together with Slash. Leading to another mystery about his goals, so perfect build up.

4. The build up to someone who can misuse Magnum to destroy the world is also great. So whatever end game villain you introduce

Amazing One Shot! I think Kallima finally got the break she deserved from overwork, well in a backwards way, but a break is a break either way! Excited to see more.

Really unique and creative story man keep going!

funny shit bro

really cute i liked it alot

cute asf