Definitely has a lot of potential. I can tell the amount of work put into this! Art is nice and consistent throughout as well.

thanks so much. It's heartwarming to know that there are people who really care about my work. as for the action pages, those are the ones I really take my time on. i'm busy with school right now and i'll be starting college soon so i can't spend much time giving each little panel my 100%. Once again, thanks for posting this comment, it got me a lot more motivated to make chapter 2 even better.