the art is really clean, i like how instead of the usual hormonal looking mc you've opted for a "manlier" look which really makes him stand out. The plot seems like a really fit one for the setting, which ill have to say is probably the best part of this story; an arabic/oriental looking fantasy. i wish it was just a little longer for a first chapter as we barely got to see any of the story pan out because of the exposition dump but i can definitely see this making big strides if you fix the pages you dedicate to parts of the story. looking forward to the next chapter!

thank you for your support! the world behind the story is actually what came first, i had to do a lot of research to build a completely unique world, however it may not be that unique as my biggest inspiration was Dune, which it borrows ecological ideas and names from. And as for whats coming up, the next chapter i'll give some more exposition for everyone to grasp what the world of Gaia is really like!

this is a great first chapter! i actually really liked the art style it reminds me of jjk and a little bit of vagabond! im sorry about some of my friends who only got on the app to support me, they seem to have come on here in an attempt to demoralize you, please don't feel as though your or my work in inferior, its all subjective; rooting for you to win! the potential is there!

There's an incredible level of detail and finesse! You might just take away my spot from me XD

This is honestly pretty well made despite the punchline not delivering that well, waiting to see what you make next!

THANK YOU ALL FOR THE SUPPORT! LETS KEEP IT IN NUMBER 1 THIS MONTH!