thank you so much!

Good begining and cliff hanger ! The story is easy to follow and I like the dynamic between the siblings. The Uncle is a hateble villain that's realistic since there are people like that in the world. The only critique I have is several spot of repetative and slightly unnatural dialogue, but other than that great job! Can't wait to read ch.2 and more in the future ^_^

Thank you! I will definitely give your work a read and let you know my thoughts ^_^

I love the story so far! Well paced with excellent fights. The art work is fantastic!