A very interesting read! I really like that you put the Malay culture influence in your story. The panel's flow is easy to read and also the story's pacing is really good. Only one conplain is the font is very difficult to read when I read it on a phone. I suggest using Anime Ace font because you can easily read it when it is very small. I can't wait for the next issue and keep up the great work!

I'm loving the story so far! but some panels is a little confusing to read at first and that is okay because you are still learning to make Manga. I think you need to improve on your anatomy, perspective & also some panels arrangement. You got the potential & I like to see you improve more in the future as a Mangaka!

I really like the story & the panel is not confusing & also easy to read. But you need to practice more on the cleanliness of your lineart. You got the potential to go even further in Manga making.

I'm very happy that you like reading my manga! We keep your feedback as reminder to improve it more in the future.

That's ending was heart-wrenching... and manage to pull my heartstrings just like your first manga. A step-up in quality in term of your drawing and the only complain is some pages is kinda hard to see the panel flow at the first glance (I had read several times just to understand the flow of the story) and also anatomy of the character could do some works. Highly recommended 9/10!