You put some great effort in that, but I just don't like your art style so I won't elaborate more, it would be unnecessary hating (cause its subjective). I'm a bit intrested in reading the story, because of how many people read your chapters (I'm a bit jeloud lol). So I guess it must be good. I'll read it if you can convince me, can you say what's good/best about your story?

It's great to see you do not fail to deliver a good grounded story, so to sum up, I'll put it in simple words,
really good, I loved it!

Also, 12 page, 3 panel "comic...want"
speech bubble is a bit too small

Great chapter, it just sucks to see you so underrated

Thanks and I checked it out

Well, it's nice. You still got a lot of things to fix comic wise, paneling isnt clean, speech bubbles are usually too large, and characters don't have the correct anatomy yet (even for stylized art, which is manga). But yeah, story wise it is cool, the atmposhere isn't like flat.
good luck with improving!

Glad to hear that!

Great, sad to see the mc see the world for what it is at the worst