You put some great effort in that, but I just don't like your art style so I won't elaborate more, it would be unnecessary hating (cause its subjective). I'm a bit intrested in reading the story, because of how many people read your chapters (I'm a bit jeloud lol). So I guess it must be good. I'll read it if you can convince me, can you say what's good/best about your story?

It's great to see you do not fail to deliver a good grounded story, so to sum up, I'll put it in simple words,
really good, I loved it!

Small critique, I'd enjoy it much more if Darian had more motivation to go inside a building where he knows people inexplicably die (like in first chapter of jjk where yuji is established to be strong so prob brave and his close friends are in danger, so saving them makes for a logical decision). Even if random that boy from hospital could have been his brother (for example) to fix that issue. Plus you give yourself a challenge to answer. How nobody (civilians) knows anyone who saw a shadow or had known that was killed by one. Because the attack have to be common if they react to the news of shadows so casually, it doesnt work without proper context. So I'm saying it might work, but the way any authority or organisation would work to ensure your story is logical, will require for them to have ridiculus control over media (or some way of manipuating society thanks to "magic") Otherwise great work, I like the protagonist and I adore the art style, keep it up!

Also, 12 page, 3 panel "comic...want"
speech bubble is a bit too small

Great chapter, it just sucks to see you so underrated

Thanks and I checked it out

Well, it's nice. You still got a lot of things to fix comic wise, paneling isnt clean, speech bubbles are usually too large, and characters don't have the correct anatomy yet (even for stylized art, which is manga). But yeah, story wise it is cool, the atmposhere isn't like flat.
good luck with improving!

Glad to hear that!

Great, sad to see the mc see the world for what it is at the worst