now for some down sides.
(these are nitpick that might just be from my own personal tastes.) althgough it has gotten better the pacing still needs work, once in a while, it seems like theyre chatting for hours and it slows the story down. however you seems to be doing that less.

also, i dont really care for the siblings that much, their personalities just kinda blend for me, however, i do wanna see them free and live a happy life again, so its not that i dont care at all, i just need a stronger reason to care. the uncle also seems "mustache twirling" evil with no real personality other than being a grumpy dick.

also the art still needs work, BUT you are improving so ill let it slide!

But besides all that, im very excited to see more! keep up the improvement and good work!
hell i wouldnt mind potentially collaborating with you on something in the future since it seems like our series have similar themes of loss, religion, guilt, sin, and blood!

final score (so far) 7/10

Ok, so i caught up and read everything! so heres my reveiw

im not gonna comment on the first five chapters too much since you already commented on them yourself. so from 6-10 i gotta say its a massive improvement.

The newer art style makes it easier to read. i know what im looking at and it feels like an actual world now. the story is starting to pick up now and is becoming more of its own thing then "poor orphans go thru tragedies."

the Puppet is easily the best part of the story! her action scenes are just fantastic and fluid! i was reading those scenes with a grin. her design is killer too! (pun intended)

also personally i dig the catholic and guilt stuff. i legit plan on doing similar stuff with those concepts with ODD (my series) just after i get down with the first arc

I'm digging the updated art style!. the thinner likes make it look better!

im gonna be honest.
the first few chapters just felt like a darker "A Series of Unfortunate Events." but i kept reading because youre the only person to comment on my stuff and i owe you this. HOWEVER Once the Doll arrived, You hooked me! i love how shes now killing the people who are needlessly torturing these innocent children. i love her dark and creepy aesthetic and how she feels otherworldly.
im excited to see where it goes from here!

i totally did a "poggers face" when i saw the granny with the gun

I appreciate it! also "outstanding manga?" those words have touched my soul and now im even more motivated to work on the next chapter! Thank you so much!

ill let you know what i think of your series too!