I really enjoyed this, I love that there's no words spoken just visual story telling.
Excited to see what else you'll make in the future!

Love the art style! I'm interested to see more.

I LOVE THIS! love the art, characters and made me sad
Also some of the wording in the dialogue was a bit weird but I'll let It slide and i really want to see more of your work in the future!

This was fantastic! Great art, character designs and feels very cinematic.
Cant wait to see what else you make in the future!

I love this! The art, the panelling, the story is all great and really impressive for this to be your first manga, I can't wait to see what's your next project will be!

No, he doesn't mind losing he just want to have fun and play dangerous games because he's bored of the life he was now.

The dialogues are completely fine, its just the placement of the bubbles. Alot of the bubbles are outside of the panels (which isn't bad to do) sometimes makes it difficult to know which to read first, for example in this chapter on page 13 the bubbles where too cluttered together in one panel and I started reading in a backwards 5 shape (reading Muun dialogue, then the old lady's, back to Muun, which wasn't suppose to be the case) personally I would lower her bubble so that flow wouldn't break and maybe overlap a bit of Muun's "you should-" bubble since she is interrupting his speech.
This problem was a bit worst in the previous chapters and not so much here, everything else flow nicely and I can see great improvement!
overall, if you're doing the style of putting bubbles outside of panels for everything double check and make sure if the bubbles aren't breaking flow of the page.

Read all the chapters so far and its been a wild experience. I'm liking the story and mystery so far and curious where it leads!
I like to point out that the speech bubbles can be confusing to read at times but it doesn't effect my reading experience.

I like your thinking, also sorry for the late response and i'll gladly read your story!

Peak!