Well done, you nailed it especially with Pomi's design 🔥🔥

What a nice way to introduce the power systems in the first chapter, now i'm very curious,i want to see how the void Chantek is gonna work.

Hello there, i come from youtube, i'm the one who asked you about how much time did you spent for each page. Btw, not only the artwork is good, even the story is funny, Drake and Ken-nine are the perfect duo., I can't wait to see the next chapter.

I also would like to see your opinion about my works and give me some ideas, if you have enough time to read https://medibang.com/mpc/titles/kp2401020049377510025738316/

It's ok, take your time, i recommend to give priority to your studies :)

This Dante looks like the anorexic fusion between Guts from Berserk and Askeladd from Vinland saga, the design is cool btw, can't wait to see chapter 2

The artstyle is wonderful, the colors,the expressions, the lineart, and the fact that you've associated the main characters to species of vipers give them an interesting element to their characterizations., i like it.

A bit? My drawings needs A LOT of improvements. I'm glad you enjoyed the dialogues tho, thank you.

Praise the sun \[T]/

Thank you! :)

perspective* not prospective