Well done, you nailed it especially with Pomi's design 🔥🔥

What a nice way to introduce the power systems in the first chapter, now i'm very curious,i want to see how the void Chantek is gonna work.

It's ok, take your time, i recommend to give priority to your studies :)

This Dante looks like the anorexic fusion between Guts from Berserk and Askeladd from Vinland saga, the design is cool btw, can't wait to see chapter 2

The artstyle is wonderful, the colors,the expressions, the lineart, and the fact that you've associated the main characters to species of vipers give them an interesting element to their characterizations., i like it.

A bit? My drawings needs A LOT of improvements. I'm glad you enjoyed the dialogues tho, thank you.

Praise the sun \[T]/

Thank you! :)

perspective* not prospective

I saw your youtube video about your struggles to post this oneshot, it's very relatable, btw i love the character design and the action scenes you've made, there's an excellent work of prospective too in some pages, you have potential to becoma a pro, because this is well made.

If you have enough time, i wish you could read my manga and tell me what you think about it, i would be happy to hear your opinion.

https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/zc2401020049377600025738316/