Wow that was fire🔥 good luck on your next chapter!

Keep it up

As your rival (creator of “the chi games”) I really think it’s a good manga, no doubt about that. But I personally don’t like your art style but the 2 panel spread was sooo cool bro

Can’t wait to read it!

Good luck bro!

I’m 15 by the way😅 u need to improve on drawing backgrounds (the trees on the background of their fight were too simple, try using screen tones) or u didn’t draw background at all. Also It was weird that Ali was so strong on his first fight (I think a good way to make him strong fast is using a time skip), also as u said at the end it was too much like jojo

Thx! I’m gonna make sure my next manga’ll me even better! My friends told me the same as you did so I’m gonna practice it

Thanks!

Thank you soooo much bro, I really appreciate it!