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Cute!! Can’t wait to see more!

Very nice! It’s true: Women are not candy! Many men have much to learn, sadly. Please keep up the good work and follow your dream!!

I knew somethin was up with those Sonics 😡

That was fun! Nice building of tension!

Great work! That last page really says it all, I think. It makes me not like some art teachers very much!!

Keep up the good work!❤️

Great stuff! I can’t wait to see Nuela Island!! And I hope you enjoy drawing on paper, I sure do.

If I can offer some constructive criticism to help you get even better, I would say “slow down” and “zoom out” a little bit. Your art is fantastic, I love your character designs and the action panels work well, but I often find myself wishing you would “pull the camera back” a bit and give me a good look of the whole scene! And you can use moments like that to add “silence” to a scene and build tension, or inspire a sense of awe and wonder in the audience at the same time. And in adding moments of “silence” or “slowness”, it gives us readers a chance to sit with the characters a little longer and feel like we know them better. It helps put us in their shoes!

Keep up the good work! I’m looking forward to more!!

I love your art, this is great! I sometimes get a bit lost in the panels, though, and I noticed one instance that might help:

Page 13. The top two rows of panels are good, but the bottom panel confused me at first. I thought she had turned around and headed back to the tied-up guy! My suggestion here would be to block things just a bit differently: Have the back of the boy’s head at the far right of the panel in the foreground, the woman approaching him in middle, and the tied-up captain on the left in the background.

This is a fun read, though! Keep it up!

You do NOT mess with a man’s brisket!!😤

Thanks so much for your kind words! I will definitely check put your manga! Have a nice day!

Thanks! Can you believe when I started this little “training arc”, I thought it would be 10 pages or less!!