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You have no idea how much I appreciate you taking the time to analyze my work and write to me pointing out so many flaws, I apologize for being late in my response. Many people pointed out my lack of clarity in my art and the overall claustrophobic mess that is my pages, I've been studying how my favourite artist make their panels and I've been putting it all into practice over on my Twitter. I hope I've improved even a little at paneling, please tell me what you think when I post my next work in the coming week. I've also been more conscious of keeping things consistent as I'm drawing. I've also been studying how to structures stories but it's one of the areas I'm really really weak at and I have to admit I still can't formulate stories properly but I'm constantly working on it so hopefully with time I'll get better at it.

I've been able to learn so much from drawing this manga, I lack the experience and hope I get better with time. Again thank you so much for taking the time to writ

Thank you so much for this constructive feedback. I've been working a lot on my composition and making my pages clear, hopefully I've improved a little since I uploaded this. It's something I'm constantly keeping in mind even more so whenever I receive a comment like this that points it out so thank you very much. Please continue observing my works and pointing out whether I'm doing something right or wrong

This was a really fun read, keep it up

For some reason the website won't let me reply to the comments directly. Thank you so much artnpets, I'm so glad you liked it. I was so anxious putting it up but when I saw your comment I felt so relieved. Thank you.

And also thank you so much max_a_million this feedback is extremely helpful to me, I really appreciate it. I'll definitely keep in mind to take pictures of pages in better light.
I don't have a computer so it's a little difficult for me to do a lot of the fancy techniques most manga have. But I remind myself some of the absolute greatest manga were made traditionally, so I'll continue doing my best with what I have. Again thank you so much for these comments.