Im making it for fun, its up to me, so stfu

At page 6, Akito supposed to say you* not yoh*, but i misspelled, everything here is created under a day, the last chapter was bad, i know, but i guess this is better, since yesterday im too busy, but now i have free time

Said a stickman Comic creator, listen i was too busy to make everything to be good, plus this is my first manga, im trying to make update every day, atleast my art are better then yours, if you cant do better then dont critisize people, i know my art is bad but atleast the cover is good

Wrong, In komi-san cant communicate, Sometimes demon slayer theres a bubble expression because sometimes when you draw an manga and not a stickman Comic, its hard to figure will people undersntand this face , or maybe its looks like a gross face or a angry face rather then scared face, the other example is the panel that you think, He is smilling, his actual expression was serious mouth but you see it as Smilling thats why theres expression explanation

Thanks for the critisize, yes im young im 19 yo asian, but that aaron charactor suppose to be childish, also yes i reuse the same panel, because im kinda bad at drawing, again yes,things move too quickly because i dont have time drawing the full action its not like my manga is a stickman or smth, and Keeping a character the exactly same design is hard if you draw a real manga and not stickman comic, the example of it is like komi-san cant communicate, in the first few mangas the design of komi's hair looks ordinary, but Through chapter her upper hair became different from before

Glock* not gloch

Fun fact: these name came from google, i just search, "male japanese name" or "female japanese name", and combine whatever sounds good,
Also yes, Aaron is freaking gojo with a gloch in his rari

Idk why or how, This comic is more pupular then mine, please give me advice

At page 4, daniel supposed to say "think" not thing, its all because auto-correct

Dray2far, i dont know what im wrong about here, but my english arent really good, but if its about story, this manga is based on a novel that i write since the first year of me in boarding school, so i wouldnt change any main plot of the story, and i promise you there will be everything here, plot twist, Romance, and all