this looks so professional. I could see this getting an actual publisher.

wow I love your sense of visual, tho your rendering could use a bit of improvement. You got a knack for storytelling

must've been from the websites, here you go https://twitter.com/lodokali

thank you very much sir, y'know in the first draft, he still goes home to hang himself but with relief and acceptance. But I change it cause I think it doesn't fit the whole narrative

silent comic? wow, I just fin out about your manga. I don't know if it's your panelling or character expression, but your story is so easy to read