I am baaack 😁😁 i really like the workand as i mentioned before the fact that its finger drawn on a phone amazes me as i could never make something like this on a phone with just fingers. Although i think you should let your pages breath a bit more perhaps 5 or so pages would allow your story to flow even better, i think there is a presentation of kishimoto analyzing this to horikoshi. Other than that you can watch the show alchemy of souls which i believe has superb cinematography and storyboarding, this way you can elevate your panel layout and the aesthetic? Not the exact word i was searching for but i ll have to make do with it...overall i think its a good work and has plenty of room to evolve both it and you. Keep it up and i await the next chapter 🙏😁😁

Thank you very much 😁😁.
I read a small portion for now and i can say i am surprised you did all that just with a phone and fingerwork, must've been hard, once i fully read it i will leave a comment 🫡😁😁