Eleazar is a boy lmao

Cliffhanger en resumen xD

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Spamming on me again?

I mean, from all the spam I've got in the last few days, this is the best, but, just want to point:

Dude, don't do spam, I know it's hard even for me, who is a marketing student, but spamming this way is not good. Lucky me I'm gonna use this for a TikTok(Spanish) but not all people is gonna be that good to read it (only if they feel sad for you).

You have a way to entertain people, and I have to applaud you. But your story is a bit, seen, most of people could say what's going to happen only seeing the first pannels. You can't redo what you did but you can think better how to improve your story (really is super cliché).

And just one more thing, try to avoid brushes that makes backgrounds. I know is more work but it wouldn't look that bad (really, the difference between your normal style and the brushes is so high and feels antinatural)

I don't want to be disrespectful or rude, just want to point:
1. Don't do Spam, I'll use this for a reel on TikTok(Spanish) and I will find it useful in one way, but most of people want a real opinion and they will ignore you
2. I don't know your age but you are really really new on this and that's noticeable. Most of people, specially otakus, are so so strict with the art style and you are on a platform specifically for otakus to otakus. I don't mean you have to give up and anything like that, but you have to give a lot of effort to bring a good comic, in both, in art style and on the story and you, for the moment, lack on both. Young people are incredibly creative and maybe you have a loot of good ideas, but let them cook instead of bringing it so directly. I know we usually want to have all at the moment, but my comic on which you coment, had almost 1 year of preparation and 5 years if we use when it was though. Just, improve, let your ideas develop and then publish honorably

Tienes mucho potencial para la acción, ¡no te rindas!