I thought this was pretty cute!
I love vampires, and am considering working on a one shot featuring a vampire myself. Though it’ll take on a far darker tone.
I’m excited to see how the next one goes, and how you continue to improve. :)

If you’re interested here’s a cute, short silent comic I drew back in July. It’s read left-to-right.
https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/vw2408061519222220026611678/

This was quite fun! I love your use of tones, and the way you depict the visceral nature of war.