Thank you! I'm glad you like it ! As for your considerations , next time i'll try to shorten the text even more . This is a work i've made with the academy and mostly because of my inexperience i've made some errors , tried to shorten the text but i'm always afraid to shorten it too much ahah! For the size of the text i've been told to make it like that so i took that for good , it's a 9 size.
Anyways i'll treasure your words and i'll try to make the sequel even better ! Please if you can and want spread the word , i would love to hear more opinions on this first work!

Checked it out! My compliments for the story!

Really Enjoyed it! Keep it up the good work and i'll wait for the sequel too! Really loved the story!