Keep doing this and it will get better. I advise maybe to use apps to add the text boxes so it pops out more and it’s easier to read. But don’t give up on your story.

Check mine here and tell me what you think. https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/dv2501011603128770026640723/

For your first manga it’s very understandable

Check out mine here
https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/eo2408130029374050026640723/

I get that. Tbh I was just really lazy with the art. I’ll try to make the next ones better maybe