I checked out your manga. What I would recommend adding are page numbers at the bottom. It’s more convenient for reading when there is proper separation.

Also, when drawing, I would keep the frame consistent on all sides. There’s an issue here with the right side being cut off. Was this drawn like that, or did the scanner not scan it properly?

The phrase at the end of the last page should be 'The End.'

Take a look at my manga 'Tobirama Chronicles of the End' as an example

I checked out your manga. Next time you upload it to this site, make sure to select 1 page in the settings and set it to be read vertically. It’s inconvenient to read and view when there are 2 pages at once

I checked out your manga. Next time you upload it to this site, make sure to select 1 page in the settings and set it to be read vertically. It’s inconvenient to read and view when there are 2 pages at once