Hi, you asked me for my opinion, I think its refreshing to see colors in a manga. Maybe you should consider purchase a graphic tablet and go full digital. Since scanned colors tend to banish and show too much of background white....Or, you can use other kind of coloring like watercolour, or markers. Those cover a lot more than pencils. Keep it up!

It looks really nice!
Would you be so kind to check mine?
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sure!

Feel free to provide feedback

Thank you, of course I'll upvote yours

Nice job!
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Nice work, could you rate mine please?https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/592408291319070480026677695/

Thanks!

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