Beginning could've used some work imo. They become friends too quickly. But I liked the ending cause it was consistent and paced well. Good job

Good job 👍

Solid chapter 1. Really liked the character designs. Action was easy to follow. Looking forward to future works

Hi. Note I will be leaving geekcon soon

Please make your way to the booth. You have won 2 posters. May decide to leave early, so please be prompt

Hi. Just wanted to let you know that when you come to the event tomorrow, please drop by and pick up any 2 posters. Congrats

Congrats. You've won 2 posters! Ome to table 58 at the back of the centre and collect your prizes

Hi. Not sure what you're referring to. Could you elaborate?

Lol. Thanks! Will make sure to check my Grammar etc in the future lol

Thanks for the comment. Your entry has been received. Any and all feedback is much appreciated. This includes criticism so long as it's constructive. What I'm trying to say is, no need to pull any punches when commenting. Anyways thanks again. Please keep an eye on this post at the con