Ch2 is much better in my opinion.

I updated the page where his mom is on the floor to cut back some info and build more mystery.

I updated pg 19 Kamuza speaking to change the amount of information release an
Bout his power. I've heard I'm gibing too much information so I'm going to cut back.

Thankyou. I read your manga. It was fire

This is fire I gyaaats to know how you did the toning and shadowing like that. Check out my manga and let me know what you guys think.
https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/oe2411151823504200026835588/

Thos manga has a great storyline. Try and improve the art and it will be a master piece. All the best wishes to you. Can yall check out my manga and let me know what you think? This is ch1
https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/oe2411151823504200026835588/

Hey guys sorry bout it being separate. I think I'll have to wait until the contest is over before switch ch1 to a series instead of a one shot before I can add ch2 as a continuation of ch1

This is fire for real. The plot and how the characters are presented is truly masterful. Not gonna lie... I'm kinda not very great at that. See for yourself.https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/oe2411151823504200026835588/

Thankyou for the review. I read your manga and I am speechless. It really hit hard. Your doing a very good job and I hope to read more in the future. If there is anything you see in my manga I can improve on please let me know. This is my first project.

I hope you all enjoy this manga.