Love the dragon ball art style being worn on this projects sleeve with some cleaning up of the line work less cross hatching and motion lines it will make the project more readable some panels get darkened out with cross hatching, but regardless keep up the great work !

I see you leave lots of comments to get readers so a tip for keeping them is improving your art greatly I recommend reading some books on anatomy and perspective it will open up a vast world of creative doorways for you. Try framed perspective vol 1 first and then framed ink vol 1 for a starts.

Pretty fantastic art style love the thin line approach but some line weight will help build the image a lot keep up the great work !

I like the at style with some work on the perspective you could be going places also the story set up is really great got me invested by the end. Keep up the awesome work!

I really like this Gabrielle looks sick and then having numbers reminds me of kingdom hearts good art as well keep it up and you might enjoy my manga oni hunter !
Anyway keep up the great work dude !
Here's my work if you wanna check it out https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/yp2502030327026680026941170/

The jojo influence being worn right on this books sleeves is awesome keep up the cool work and tip from one comic artist to another variety of lines in some of your panels will help like bold outlines on characters with thinner clothing wrinkles instead of all tiny thin lines .

Awesome art work man completely breathtaking lighting and the inking is flawless keep up the amazing artwork and Thank you for checking out my work Oni Hunter and leaving feedback!

The world's concept is cool would love to see more environments keep up the great work !

I really like the penciled look keep up the awesome art !

Love the birdeye shot of the war as well as your environments keep up the great work !