Hey, it's been a long while, still don't know to directly reply to comments on mobile as the option just greys out. I won't be drawing more of my comic yet and it'll be some time, but i have been brainstorming some ideas for it that i hope to faithfully add them in.

Your art has improved! You're building up suspense and questions like what's the outcome of the great sacrifice and will they target the main characters, speaking of the main characters, i thought the pair being electrocuted were the main characters!

Story is pretty neat, the main characters have their motivations set with a gimmick to back it up like how the main protagonist doesn'thave a gift, but I think the transition into the 15 year time skip is a bit too abrupt. Also I feel like you could play into the main guy having no gift a bit more, like showing more interactions of his peers and how much it affects him, which may also give his fondness for Akane much more meaning and weight.

Interesting story, at first I thought this was just romance until I read chapter 1, which had some action and another plot involved, keep it up.

Don't believe I've said this already: but i like the work you've put in with the shading and the darker areas.

The doll recognizing the two main characters is a good set up for what's to come.

Thanks again, just finished this page recently so there'll definitely be more.

Your linearts and motion lines are incredible!

If it doesn't trouble you, could you check out my work and tell me what you think?
https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/3a2404041351388870004963894/

When i started drawing a lot more, i remembered using printer paper before i got myself a sketchbook. I didn't like all the lines that were on regular notebook or graphing sheets.

If it doesn't trouble you, could you check out my works and tell me what you think?

https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/3a2404041351388870004963894/

Ok, thank you cvensart!

Hey cvensart, I've been using this site fairly recently. If I'm publishing a comic here, is it best if i finish the whole chapter then post or can i post new pages as i go