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My background as a Manga Creator
I've made some amateur comics way back. I've since improved my art style and will remake these!
• Wayward Soul: Guardian: https://www.deviantart.com/macaroll/gallery/46344654/wayward-soul-guardian
• Occupation Grim Reaper: https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/occupation-grim-reaper/list?title_no=293377
Nicely done on this, friend!!! ✨
Three things I saw that worked:
1. Details: Their environment, weapons and vehicles especially! They are nicely drawn!
2. War Story: I've read a few war mangas like Berserk, Vinland Saga, and Golden Kamuy. And this one also gives me the feeling of "What's gonna happen next?!" Because war is unpredictable sometimes.
3. Vibe: Somehow, this gave me an Attack on Titan vibe because they don't know what they're fighting against. Mystery stuff is so good!
One thing that I'd like to see more of:
A clear setting and timeline: Okay, I know that it is a war setting, but where? What timeline? Does it occur in the real world or in a fantasy world? Is it post-apocalyptic or modern times? You can have a fantastical world and still have modern tech mixed in. You can also have the real world but with ancient tech. In the end, it'll be all up to you.
That is all.
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