This is so cool! Action beautifully done! I love the arrows hair xD. Very exciting to read <3

I liked your story. It happened a lot of things and the end is hopeless. The baby of Edgar will be the next hero? What happened with Mariah?

I think this episode is way better than the first one. Mysterious and interesting. Also art is better and reading flow is also clearer. Fighting!

I like the creepy girl! Revenge? I think some backgrounds are way too dark, moreover it looks cool.

Thank you so much for the feedback! You're really kind! Thanks for your support <3