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Psycle

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Dan, a boy with a troubling secret, longs to find his place in life. A sudden encounter with his estranged aunt, Joy, might lead to the answers he seeks?

MACHINE GAMU 3 years ago

> KI
Thanks!

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MACHINE GAMU 3 years ago

> Liam Gray
Thank you! I'm still figuring out the right size for everything. I will be more careful next time.

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KI 3 years ago

This was pretty solid. Nice

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Liam Gray 3 years ago

The artwork was clean, crisp and beautiful. My only suggestion would be when finishing a page zoom out to the standard size and give it a look. There were a few instances where your SFX for walking were so small as to be illegible. Don't zoom in too much. You'll end up drawing too small or it wont show up in print or readers won't be able to make out the kanji/sfx.

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MACHINE GAMU 3 years ago

> SEVEN
Thank you!

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Brahm 3 years ago

This is really cool! The art is amazing!

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Creator
GAMUMARU
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MACHINE GAMU
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Maru

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Release Date: 3 years ago

Number of Pages: 44

Language: English

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